Hey i knew you would be doing this contest! I was up last night thinking about it when i should have been sleeping -__- *clears throat*
gj on the wyvern hes a cute little guy. However it seems to be a tad crowded overall. When I look for designs personally I find is visually pleasing for either simple designs or well placed complex designs. This is kinda in the middle of the two. The abstract snowflakes by themselves are nice, but kinda look out of place in the design. The piece also needs more dynamic flow, like a place for your eye to begin and end.
Goods: ~ok color scheme ( plz keep something white in there i luv the pop). ~simplistic design ~good concept
Needs work: ~Placement of objects/get rid of objects ~dynamic flow ~crowdedness
I hope this helps >.<;;; thats my first honest critique lol. i love your style and i hope we can help each other grow
Wow, thanks for the critique Laya! I always approve of critiques like this and you're right, it helps us all to grow. I do agree with you completely that it is too crowded, however, as a test, I'm going to leave this one the way it is, and do more entries. I'm curious how it will hold up against others as I enter more. Once the other three are completed, I'll come back to this one if I have time and fix it up. I've got a faerie, hippo-campus, and another dragon in the works atm