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gj on the wyvern hes a cute little guy. However it seems to be a tad crowded overall. When I look for designs personally I find is visually pleasing for either simple designs or well placed complex designs. This is kinda in the middle of the two. The abstract snowflakes by themselves are nice, but kinda look out of place in the design. The piece also needs more dynamic flow, like a place for your eye to begin and end.
Goods:
~ok color scheme ( plz keep something white in there
~simplistic design
~good concept
Needs work:
~Placement of objects/get rid of objects
~dynamic flow
~crowdedness
I hope this helps >.<;;; thats my first honest critique lol. i love your style and i hope we can help each other grow